cool!
i like the style, and the characters. you should give them voices though, i think. also it moved along a bit fast. other than that great job, ill be looking forward to another episode
cool!
i like the style, and the characters. you should give them voices though, i think. also it moved along a bit fast. other than that great job, ill be looking forward to another episode
thanks. i'm getting a working mic this week, so voices shall be installed soon.
no0t bad
good job eric! it looks like you worked hard on this, and even though im not a huge fan of anime or ninjas, this still was very good! here are some things i think would make it better, and would better your skills as well:
work more on your anatomy, it looks like youve been practicing already. looks ok, but practice will make it look really good.
the audio levels were off. the music was louder than the dialogue. i could hardly hear what the ninja was saying.
perspective. read up on perspective and practice it!
good job, keep up the good work!
nothe baide
i really liked it. it moved slowly but that i think helped with the mood of it. did this really happen to you or anyone you know?
thank GOD
...cuz i almost downed this glass full of it.
=)
dude!
if you DONT finish this then fuck you! LOL
i gave you a 4/5 but i am VERY sure that if it were a completed thing that all my 5 were to belong to this!
very good indeed
all i have to say is good work!
4/5
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OH GET OVER IT!! LOL
good
it was funny, although it did drag on a bit. but then again we wouldnt want it to be too short either
cool!
looks good!
2/5
really cool !
this was funny! i actually didnt want it to end!
good points:
the humor - cause / effect type thing.
the pillow / glass factory - LOL
low points - the only thing i see dull about this is some of the backrounds were... blarg. but this may have been your intention.
anyway, good luck, you have a fan, so i want to see episode 2 soon!
4/5
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